28 April 2005 – Lectorial – week 8

28 April 2005 – Lectorial – week 8

Dan spoke about causality (cause and effect), narrative and non-narrative in a story.

The Princess Bride, Gone Girl and an old satirical Warner Brothers adaptation of Charles Perrault’s Little Red Riding Hood were used to communicate these points.

Our group exercise was to determine the narrative and non-narrative elements in a short film by Daniel Askill entitled We Have Decided Not to Die. For me this film was teeming with narrative though not formulated in a conventional way. There were three narratives running concurrently which were all concluded to an end, represented with day-to-day artifacts residing in a surreal mise-en-scene. The three characters in this piece were seemingly escaping from an impending demise; possibly, drugs, addiction or suicide. The figures were eventually freed from the chaotic and confining forces.

I believe that, if a project is void of narrative, it is no longer ‘art’ but ‘arts and crafts’. Daniel Askill’s piece was most definitely far from the latter, rather a poignant and thought provoking work of art.

We Have Decided Not To Die by Daniel Askill

We Have Decided Not to Die by Daniel Askill (2006)

Closing In on the P4 Concept

We’re getting closer to establishing our P4 premise and I am really impressed with the ideas that have been workshopped so far. Sal and Tim worked like a machine today coming up with some great concepts.

Our project statement is yet to come though our goals are clear; to produce a high quality product in a medium that neither of us have explored… that’s in a nutshell.

We spoke a lot about the history of our set task, mediums, and frequently referenced Canadian intellectual Marshall McLuhan who coined the notion of the medium as the message.

Our team (we really need a name) created a shared folder in Google Drive and entered minutes, ideas, meeting times and meeting places that work best for us. We will need to convene outside the classroom though, should we not be able to attend these meetings for whatever reason, team (insert name) agreed that Skype would be our go to form for beating the drum. Aptly, the media that we may choose to communicate our ideas through will most certainly become the message.

Stay tuned!

Sal's aesthetic mind map creation.

Sal’s aesthetic mind map creation.

Protagonist Review

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Hazel Ocskó and Benedict Kazlauskas in All War is Deception (2013)

 

After reading the reading by Robert McKee, I was inspired to bring my focus back to my first theatre production. I had received much positive feedback about the story that I was telling however, there were criticisms that, most of which, were centered around the story’s development.

Forced to adhere to an encroaching deadline, I had to fast track the preproduction process and move things to the stage as soon as I could. Despite each character being thoroughly developed and explored, there were still gaps for the audience; I ascertained this from surveying those in the know, some audience members and the performers themselves.

I guess the reason I keep banging on about my play is that, I want to rewrite it and apply all that I’ve learned from Robert McKee, Lajos N. Egri, Konstantin Stanislavsky and Gilles Deleuze and bring these characters back to life. Because the majority of the play’s development was centred on character, I, and some of the performers, feel that we have become friends with our creations. I have empathy and sympathy for each character as they represent a part of us.

I believe that McKee’s idea of the switching protagonists could be applied, also, Bordwell and Thompson’s notion of establishing a primary narrator.

So, just to offer a synopsis in a nutshell; it is a tragedy where a box of toys come to life within in the mind a young boy, there is a box ballerina and 3 toy soldiers, each of which have their own character traits. The toys world is set in the time of the Second World War and the ballerina ends up being gunned down before the third soldier can profess his love, this is paralleled by the boys story whose dysfunctional family is falling apart. The protagonist model as it stands goes, A) ballerina B) young boy C) Soldier3. Long story short, it’s confusing… there is no one to root for. Should this production be revisited, the protagonist model with need to be strengthened by simplification, perhaps it begins with the ballerina until it is superseded by the boy.

www.allwarisdeception.com

 

Soundscapes and Attention

Jasmine had us consider soundscapes and how our mind prioritises different sounds in order of their importance and relevance to us. We categorised the modes of listening into figure, ground and field. The figure sound is perceived as the primary sound source and it is brought to the forefront of our attention because it is either the loudest noise or most poignant. The ground sound would be the sounds that are resonant, though, are not as important. Then there is the field sound which is audible, but only through actively seeking to observe it.

This was contextualised by the presentation of the photo of Phan Thị Kim Phúc and the child survivors of a horrendous napalm attack during the Vietnam War. It was photographed by Nick Ut and entitled The Terror of War.

We were asked to categorise the sounds in this shot, and for me they were;

Figure – The sounds of the children screaming in terror, one can almost hear their crying.

Ground – Would be the sound of the flames, the pops of gunfire and perhaps the yelling of the soldiers.

Field – I imagined as the loading of the rifles, the tiny feet on the road and sound of the wind pushing the smoke to the right of frame.

The Terror of War by Nick Ut

The Terror of War by Nick Ut

A sound designer may choose to manipulate sounds in order to emulate this human prioritisation. With the use of reverb, a listener may get the sense that the sound has been captured in a large room, likewise, the sound of a whisper brought to the foreground (figure), may thrust the sense of intimacy upon the listener by the use of amplification.

On a theatre production that I produced the sound for in 2013, I had to start a piece with the sound of a child whispering which began as the figure sound initially until, the hum of a war plane grew louder and louder until it dominated the soundscape. This was achieved by the use of various automation techniques on the software program Protools. The plane sounds were sourced from archival files on Freesounds.org.

Working with sounds on Protools.

Working with sounds on Protools.

Codes

Either faked or lost in translation, the truth conveyed by the media will always be in question. Media outlets with an underlying agenda may bias a topic in a way that serves to their specific ethos, likewise, different languages can have an expansive vocabulary of words to describe the same thing. Structuralism standardises or aggregates the language of how to critique.

Being employed in a workplace which harbours a myriad of muti-disaplined and multi-cultured workers, we are constantly inventing new ways to communicate ideas as thoroughly and succinctly as possible.

2. G.Branston & R.Stafford, ‘Approaching Media Texts’ (Ch.1) in The Media Student’s Book. London: Routledge, 2010.

From P3 to P4

After the screening of our P3 Briefs, we were asked to critique our peer’s work.

I remarked on Alex’s  warm and honest film Bits and Piece (A Portrait of Zoe) and suggested that the topic of autism, a fleeting comment made in the film about Zoe’s brother, be explored further. Having a cousin with the disease, I know too well that it is something that is often misrepresented and in order to quell the stigma toward those with autism, more stories need to be told about it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wt26oqeSW7M

http://www.mediafactory.org.au/alexander-angliss-wilson/

The criticism that I received about my piece was that my subject mightn’t appreciate an edit that displays an imperfection in his dancing. As I non dancer, I was initially oblivious to this but have now taken this on board and will certainly consider this when working with dancers in future.

Moving on from the P3 discussions, we were assigned our groups for the P4 Brief. I’m excited to work with 2 legends, Sally and Tim, both of which had made memorable portraits in the past and both are obviously creative. Furthermore, as a group, we’re all mad about audio.

I’m very much looking forward to fleshing out the idea that we came up in class!

 

 

*?'”””= 禪

Our guest speaker Amy Saunders reiterated some important tips on how we can utilise the library website. Amy suggested some meta data tactics  that can help refine a web search; for example, the use of the asterisk after the beginnings of a word like ‘narrate’, the search will reveal all words that incorporate ‘narrate’ within a larger extension, some examples could be, narrative, narrator, narration and the likes. Likewise, a question mark ‘?’ can be used as an ‘and/or’ if you were looking for a two word topic… and with two word topics in mind, you will need quotation makes ‘””‘ to group the two words together to form a singular meaning. As mundane as all this sounds, I have returned to a new state of digital syntax zen that I am eager to put into practice on further research.

We switched to the subject of collaboration which was presented by Rachel covering points like consistency, respect, support, responsibility, fairness, trust, autonomy and clarity. It was a highly encouraging motivation talk on what to expect for future projects.

The word ‘trust’ resonated with me the most. Any project that I have walked away from and said to my self, “Hey that went well and… whoop whoop I had fun!”, was conducted in an environment of like minded people sharing the same the vision with an underlying faith in each others ethos.

Audio

Filmmakers working at an intermediate level often overlook audio, preferring to focus more on the visual aspect of the mise-en-scene.

In class we explored sound, chiefly, the use of sound recording devices and their application. We played around with the H2 Zoom Recorder which is a good unit to start with as it is compact, simple and delivers good sound quality at a high resolution; it can produce wav. files which are considered to be the industry standard in digital audio collection.

As I normally work with similar devices, the technical side of this wasn’t new to me; however, it is always good to be made aware of new sonic surroundings. I’ve established that the exterior of the RMIT campus is not a good place to record as it abuts several busy roads and the accumulative sound of trams, cars, trucks and students make for one gigantic hum. Compounding this issue, is the hard glass and concrete surfaces that bounce the sound around making it hard to get a clean recording.

Whenever I’m able to, I record audio in my home office, I have more control over how the sound waves behave as I’ve applied numerous sound baffles and bass traps. To economise, I sometimes use my surfboard cover to diffuse the sound.

Film Screening March 30th 2015

On March 30th, we were shown 3 films, The Lonedale Operator by D.W. Griffith and Mack Sennett (1911), Suspense by Lois Webber & Phillips Smalley (1913) and Sunrise: A Song of Two Humans by F.W. Murnau (1927)

The Lonedale Operator is very much the classic ‘damsel in distress’ film. A young woman who is the administration operator at a train station is sent to an outpost and is threatened by 2 bandits who wish to burgle the building.

To stall the bandits, the young woman draws what looks like a gun to hold them back though, it is revealed at the end of the film, that the object isn’t a gun at all but rather a shiny metal wrench.

The reveal of the wrench is an extreme close up shot, this is to ensure that the audience is properly  informed.

It is interspersed with the occasional coloured frames, some red and some blue. I can only surmise that these are used to elevate tension as most of them appear when the action is leading up to a point of conflict, threat or urgency.

Some directing choices seem almost comical, for example, the woman faints on the desk at thought of the bandits being near. I can only imagine that this might be an antiquated means to show her helplessness and vulnerability. Her fainting contributes very little to the narrative. There is also a scene where the eye-line of the woman is drastically off kilter, this is when she notices that the bandits are outside (below).

The Lonedale Operator by D.W. Griffith and Mack Sennett (1911)

The Lonedale Operator by D.W. Griffith and Mack Sennett (1911)

It finishes with a show of kudos from the bandits as they take off their hats in solute to the woman’s  cunning pretence. It is also made known that the love interest ‘gets the girl’ but in an awkward and flaccid embrace.

It is admirable that D.W. Griffith and Mack Sennett undertook such a project, however, there were several holes in the narrative and direction that could have been ironed out in preproduction and rehearsal. With such new and untested technology as film making was in 1911, the importance of the fundamentals of scriptwriting, direction and performance were set at a lower priority.

 

Suspense by Lois Webber & Phillips Smalley (1913) was the next film to be shown. It incorporated split screen shots where up to three characters would be placed in the same frame to represent that they were all communicating at the same moment but in different geographic areas. Webber’s technique was seldom used until it was revived in the 60’s (Bordwell Pg.462, 2012).

Suspense by Lois Webber & Phillips Smalley (1913)

Suspense by Lois Webber & Phillips Smalley (1913)

Webber brought social matters like feminism, maternity and sexual exploitation to the screen. They addressed common decency when a man standing in the middle of the road is hit by the speeding car driven by the husband of the mother in distress. The fact that the husband leaps out of the car to help the victim is a sign of chivalry and a general statement that people should lookout for their fellow citizens. This scene also functions as a means to heighten the suspense by bringing danger closer; for example, as this event slows the husband down, the police in pursuit are gaining ground to arrest the husband for stealing a car to rescue his wife and child, unbeknownst to them. It also gives the knife wielding bandit more time to advance on the mother back at the house.

Justice is served when the police capture the bandit and pardon the husband for resisting arrest; this is communicated through overacting such as large physical gestures and a major-scale condo in the musical score to arrive at the closing credits.

The feature for the day was Sunrise: A Song of Two Humans by German film director F.W. Murnau (1927).

It is the story of a Man’s lustful machinations with a mistress who lures him away from his wife and child in the look to starting a new life in the city. He agrees to murder his wife and tell the authorities that she drown by accident. When moving to carry out the act, he is overcome with guilt and retracts from his wanton intentions. To be granted forgiveness, he treats his wife to an excursion to the city, however, on the boat trip back, they are faced with a violent storm that almost kills her dealing poetic justice to the Man for his neglect.

Sunrise is a highly stylised film drawing on German expressionism creating tension with the use of distorted frames and text. Double exposures are frequently used, one instance of this was when the Man dreams of lusting over his mistress, and like an apparition, she appears from behind and caresses him like a devious spirit.

Sunrise was made on the cusp of the ‘talkies’ and despite the film being free of audible dialogue, it incorporated sound effects that were relevant to the action on the screen, one example being the sounds of the city scenes.

On discussing this film with fellow students, many had exclaimed that, hypothetically speaking, should the film had had the addition of talking, it may have only benefited somewhat.

Janet Gaynor’s performance gained her the first ever Academy Award. Sunrise had definitely raised the bar for film standards internationally.

Janet Gaynor in Sunrise (1927)

Janet Gaynor in Sunrise (1927)

Janet Gaynor in Sunrise (1927)

Flow and Heightened Consciousness

For this week’s reading, we explored the notion of collaboration and enabling conditions that contribute to flow and heightened consciousness within a group.

According to Keith Sawyer, there are 10 enabling conditions that contribute to flow (2007) and, as this notion resonated with me, I thought I’d investigate these 10 points in relation to my experiences.

How could these points be contextualised?

My preterition of specifics in these examples is very deliberate as certain issues may still be in contention.

1 The group’s goal – I had conceptualised a band in 2004 and had few people to work with. Through several audition sessions, I eventually decided on the troupe that I would later work with. However, it eventually became apartment that everyone had different goals and inevitably the group dissolved.

2 Close listening – Is total engagement, blocking out everything that is superfluous to the task. We do this in acting by spending prolonged periods of time before a performance engaging in sensory visualisation and relaxation.

3 Complete concentration –  In music, a progression change in a song can be led by an individual. Every member should be fully engrossed in their task however, it is important that they keep an ear out for the cues that lead the group into the next part of the progression.

4 Being in control – (Being granted autonomy) In a  workplace where I was granted permissions to recruit, train and coach staff autonomously resulted in an efficient and positive team. However, a friend of mine has experienced the opposite whereby the figure in charge micromanages tasks, putting their own mark on my friends work causing frustration and a blockage in the flow.

5 Blending Egos – Skyhooks front man Shirley Strachan said in the 1975 hit album, ‘Ego Is Not a Dirty Word’… and it’s true! Everybody has one but it is not necessarily about big hair, vanity and tight trousers; it is a force that drives humans toward a goal. So when egos blend with the right chemistry & balance, it can result in a powerful collaboration. Having worked in several scenarios where egos were miss-matched, I had become lucidly aware of the importance of ‘blend’; therefore, now when selecting people to work with, not only do I look for talent and poise but I also ensure there is a mutual respect for ideas.

6 Equal Participation – (Personal destruction of a group) An organisation that I had been a part of experienced issues where some staff, despite having the same ranking, were favoured over others giving a large portion less privileges intern causing friction, hindering overall flow and ultimately leading to attrition.

7 Familiarity – (With the craft and each other) Within my course at RMIT, I am slowly learning the language of how things work thus I am understanding how to engage better with fellow students and teachers and the like.

8 Communication – In my current position, I had made a pact with my boss that, in light of my varying situation with uni and family, I would keep him informed of any changes as they arise. This agreement is beneficial for both parties as my boss will be able to plan better and I feel that the company has my back so to speak.

9 Moving it forward – (Keep moving the conversation – listen closely – accept fully – extend and build) An esteemed friend of mine is a talented singer song writer who recently asked me to collaborate on one of her projects. I was of course much obliged and relished the opportunity. The elements to her success were quickly made apparent when, in a creative, brainstorming conversation, nothing was out of the realms of possibility. Any idea put forward by members of the group… no matter how absurd, would be considered. She would listen intensely and respond with, “Let’s go with that and see where it takes us”. The ideas flowed freely and the sessions were brimming with positive morale.

10 The potential for failure – (Prepare) In theatre, we thoroughly explore all the possible things that could go wrong; the most common would be forgetting one’s lines or cues. In this situation an actor should be trained to improvise as close to the intention of the script as possible; however, when I was singing with an orchestra in 2002, I became so nervous that I came in 4 bars too early; I was singing 4 bars in front of the orchestra! As it was highly unlikely that the orchestra was going to improvise around my mistake, I had to engage in 4 bars of humming, scatting and la-la-la-ing to allow for the orchestra to catch up.  I almost instantaneously became a better musician as I vowed to never let that happen again. This experience has definitely contributed to my heightened awareness. My failures have nearly always resulted in an essential learning experienced that are frequently referred to when working in a group setting.