Peer Feed Back

Emily

– I really enjoyed how Emily used camera shots to capture her subject. She focuses on shots of the hands, eyes and lips to capture body snippets of body language and character rather than letting it go unnoticed. This allows a more intimate relationship with her subject resulting in the viewer to more readily connect to her story.
– With the footage Emily used I felt that because she had a lot of stuff recorded and found, she wanted to use it all. Her film wasn’t overly cluttered or hard to understand, but could have been tightened up with a little bit more self editing.
– Otherwise I really enjoyed her film and the story she was able to capture.

Georgina

– I was effected by the powerful juxtaposition of the clinical images and the homely family conversation at the dinner table. I thought it was a powerful way to capture both sides of the subject and the situation.
– The sound was sometimes distracting as it would cut out at times and bits were louder than others but that’s something that can be improved on over time.
-I really connected emotionally with the story being told and thought she did a great job.

Project Brief 3 Media Portrait

Maria from Chrys on Vimeo.

At the start of this project I found myself apprehensive about working with the Sony MC50 video recorder. I think my inexperience shows as I knock the camera a few times and shaky cam rears it’s ugly head. In continuing in this course I would like to get more comfortable around the equipment I am working with and become more confident holding a camera.

I tried using a tripod to limit these  errors however I found it better hold the camera across from Maria, chatting like we usually do. Not only did it make her feel more comfortable but it allowed the piece to become more of a conversation rather than a questionnaire.

I chose Maria, for this project because whenever we talk I can’t help but listen to whatever she has to say. I thought this was an important quality to capture in my piece. I achieved this by using found footage to enhance her story rather than distract from it and using a series of close ups to really draw attention to what I felt was the most important parts of her story, focusing on her mouth.

The found footage I used was a mix of old animations and burlesque. Burlesque not only being something my subject was very interested in, but I felt fit the themes of sexuality. The old animations I used, helped me show things I wanted to be less literal things like fluidity or the act of vomiting. Overall I am mostly happy with my combination of found footage and actual footage to tell a story.
I also found myself experimenting more with sound this project, using music over vocals rather than being to timid to combine the two in project brief 2 and editing with things such as volume and fade ins/outs. I am pleased that I have spent more time working on sound this brief even if I still have a long way to go.

A big challenge that came with project was how much footage I had, and choosing when I had to cut back. This is still something I need to work on as portraits need to really speak volumes about a person and by adding to much footage your best pieces can get lost.

I also want to improve on titles and credits in my next piece.

Project Brief 3 – Brainstorm

Brainstorm during lecture, start of my section process:


Some notes I took from my practice interview with Maria:

“I don’t like humans, I love everyone platonically”
“I’ve never cried over a boy”
“Girl? Probably”

“a head”  – someone who runs up and down the state library to see the eclipse

“I have to show you something”

“Love when you’re drunk, birds meant you needed rescuing, but drinks turned birds into kissing”
“I throw up so nothing happened. I lost my travel money card.”
“He was a good kisser”

“Thats why I enjoyed talking to this drug dealer, I like to think I’m a good judge of character”

“I’ve cried over people I liked romantically”
– ur more obsessed when it’s romantic
– you want to kiss them all the time

key words: prude, asexual, romantic, platonic, male/female, drinking, love

Maria smiles and laughs a lot when she tells you stories, she always has something to tell you and you can’t help but listen.