Pitch Feedback

-Brief review of our pitch and Rohan’s feedback on it-

Our group had to do the pitch presentation a few days earlier than the usual date because i was going to be away for that week to New Zealand. We had a tight schedule to prepare for the presentation but once we had the concept, everything else fell together quite easily. Our concept of the main artist singing and flirting one way towards the lead female actress who does not notice him has been incorporated in a few other music videos before. Our inspirations were Don’t do that by K-POP boy band B.A.P and Just haven’t met you yet by Michael Buble. We liked the idea of keeping the whole narrative mysterious and light-hearted. We thought of the final scene of the two characters finally coming together and exchanging intense eye contact in a night club but for that moment to build up we wanted to introduce three or more different settings. Since we already had a mechanic suites as a prop, we included a self-car wash, the spa and gym for creating sexual tension between the characters and the street for the begging of the music video. When we shared our plans of filming in all these different settings to the class, Rohan was concerned that it was too much and we might not get permissions for all those locations, therefore we need to come up with some alternatives if they don’t work out and that we can even take out a few and stay in one location for longer, which would also save us more money and time.

Rohan also mentioned that the storyboard shown in the presentation was way too rough and that a more detailed storyboard that illustrates the music video shot by shot was required. He also gave us a suggestion to ask the karaoke bar where we intended to film our last scene for a discount on our entry fees in return for their business to be advertised on our music video sort of like a sponsor.

 

 

What our group need to do now is

  • Ask for permission from my apartment if it’s ok to film in the gym/pool facility area, contact the carwash for their most quiet hours and get permission to film, Contact Kareoke
  • Search for a female actress to star in the mv
  • Create a shot list

 


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