Week 8 & Presentation

In the class before our presentation we outlined the key principles for our ontographs. What do we want it to do ? how is it going to achieve that? We discussed as a class ways to achieve this and were given reading material to reflect on for our presentations at the end of the week.

Week 8 the class presented the first step to our finished ontographs. We presented to a panel of three plus Adrian in order to receive a variety of constructive feedback.

The panel made a number of observations and suggested some ideas about where I would go next.

Narration: two suggestions were made in regards to narration. One would be a soundtrack with myself talking about the topic I am exploring. The second would be my rabbling’s as I walked, speaking about the things around me in relation to Tim Ingolds book.

How it is presented: The panel suggested that I continue with this style of documentary. The seemed to like the way the videos were presented and responded more positively to the informal style compared to a more traditional short film.