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using my boyfriend as a desk is probably not conducive to my relationship or my school work…

Today’s presentation of the draft was pretty harrowing. It really drove home that at the moment our artefact is very dry. I myself lost interest in listening to it within the first five minutes. But it gave us a good opportunity to talk to Rachel and get some ideas on how to improve our final product. We all agreed on the corresponding edits from the feedback we received:

– louder mix, more evenly distributed levels.
– more references to peer approved articles and journals within the dialogue
– more pauses in the dialogue, leave time for information to sink in
– more voices, give texture to the final edit

Here’s my written notes on what we should change:

Also blastin that Bowie Low goodness where side B is just pure Eno dog.

http://https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bc_kPLYPTwI

(I have gone insane from listening to expansive ambient music and doing assignments tell my parents i love one of them)

http://https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5KGMo9yOaSU

After Dan’s lecture on media materialism wherein he mentioned Brian Eno I’ve been crankin’ dat Eno all over tha house yo.