For our synopsis and logline, our group have made changes as some of the facts on the first synopsis were based on our own thoughts of how the initial documentary would look like before filming. As a result, the structure of the story wasn’t what it ended up to look like. We wanted to describe the synopsis so that people would understand the main purpose of the story in which is, Terri as our ‘female willy Wonka’ and our logline provides a picture of the sweetness of lollies and our participant as well.

So here is our updated Logline and Synopsis:

Logline:

Inside Melbourne’s iconic Queen Victoria hides a small store dedicated to lollie lovers. Through the eyes of Terri, we see the joy and sweetness lollies bring to people’s lives.

Synopsis:

Lollie Lovers is one of the confectionery shops at the Queen Victoria Market. A generous woman with beautiful short purple hair and bright colored eye shadow, Terri, works there. Confessions of a Confectioner tells a story of Terri’s experience working at the shop and how it brings her back to her childhood memories. She has a joyful and bright personality, which influences her positive actions towards others and her own motto in life. As a result, her optimism is what drives customers to think of her as simply a ‘Female Willy Wonka’.