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Elizabeth Rough Cut

 

As we don’t have the interview with Marz yet, I decided to keep the rough cut of Elizabeth rather long to allow us to choose the portions that fit best into a discussion with Marz. It’s still very rough as I didn’t want to edit too deeply or cut out too much until we had the other footage to cut against. I created a rough structure for the film, and focussed on separating the interview into different topics to work through.

 

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topic is topical — female centric stories in the workplace

shot beautifully — world she lived in

more of her active day to day problems, how she deals with things

more anecdotal specific stories of how things have changed in the last 30 years?

needs a hook — part where she says a taxi driver is a psychologist, doctor etc. should go at the front, then move into chronological beginning of the story