Feedback on PB3

Red Hat – FilthyRatbag

  • I really liked
  • Flows very well. it seems like a conversation.
  • How can these works be refined

 

Green Hat Nigels

  • Really liked the found footage and how i tied in with the story
  • I really liked the tiling
  • The pacing felt perfect
  • But i feel like the level or tone of the film of the film didn’t really change, but then again it doen’t really need to change level
  • the comment on it, i felt like the level of the film kind of needed to change

Red Hat Jasmine Winecier

  • I found the video to be upbeat and made me feel happy that the interviewee was happy
  • I thought some of the shots were a bit noisy but it didnt really matter

 

Selected Listening N°8: Fatima Al Qadiri – Brute (album)

https://fatimaalqadiri.bandcamp.com/track/endzone

Fatima Al Qadiri’s Newest Album ‘Brute’  is a comment on Protest, the police and the media around the world. The album opens with overwhelming confusion with recordings of the unrest in Ferguson. A loud thump is heard every 5seconds as the confusion builds. Shouting and sirens howl, putting the listener onto the streets. ‘Endzone’ sets the scene and the following tracks build upon its ominous timbre.

The ambient atmosphere Fatima builds through the album is built up to the final track ‘Power’. This is the first song thats actually danceable. It takes elements from previous tracks and reconfigures them into the new song with the loud thump from ‘Endzone’.

With just field recordings, i think this album aims to comment on the corrupt nature of the media and the over-militarization of police departments who are  “drunk with power”.

Give it a listen.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8T36ns-Paw

Declutter of my blog

Quick note not everything at this time is in their right categories and there might be double ups

Today i decided to take a few steps towards the future of my blog. In the workshops each week, we usually talk about the usability of our own blogs. For example adding tag Clouds to our blogs, or even the positioning of widgets. Up until now my blog was to represent the lo-fi qualities of our projects. Now that there is a heightened emphasis on the visual qualities of our projects, my Blogs visual qualites must change.

This was a procrastination changing the theme of my blog dont get me wrong (it took an hour, much longer actually), but i actually feel like it suites the web and now what i write will be matching the style of the blog.


Details:
Theme – Superhero
Background – Artwork by Giandomenico Carpentieri Italy (graphic artist and curator)
tumblr_mgxa5c075K1qzbl72o1_1280Sidebar – I added a sidebar for ease of access. Now every post is categorised
Tag cloud – Still a work in progress, from week 7 onwards i will update it
Bookmarks – need to get rid of some
yep.


It now looks more professional than the previous fluro writing and the tilling of the man in the ghost costume
tumblr_mvnfhcchtk1ree4l2o2_r1_1280RIP GHOSTMAN

Audio editing reflection of Project 3 ‘Head Trauma’

This is a continuation of my reflection but focuses on the problems i had with audio editing.

Audio quality is a very important element in any video production, especially documentaries with interviews because they rely almost entirely on the clarity of speech.

The first problem i had with audio was at the recording location. I recorded the atmos track and noticed there was a small amount of noise despite it being a very quite room. I knew i could fix this in audition so dismissed it. I wasn’t  using a Zoom H2n and i should have borrowed one, but i thought using a friends new Rode shotgun mic would work just fine and cut most of the noise out.

When actually editing the audio I quickly realised the kerfuffle I was in. I captured a ‘noise print’ from the atmos track, then deducted the noise using the ‘noise reduction’ tool in Audition. Unfortunately by doing this it also cut out a lot of the harmonics and made the audio the sound as if it was being listened to though a long tube (like heavy compression on the internet). I applied a few different EQ’s (echoes as well) to beef up the low and high frequencies but it had minimal effect.

Screen Shot 2016-04-19 at 4.08.26 PM

As you can see in the above picture, the top right red audio wave was the before noise reduction, underneath is the is after reduction. The purple speckles have been totally removed giving ‘clean’ audio.

So i decided to hide the lost harmonics using music. I had always had the intention of using music to build the sequence but now it was even more important for ‘fixing’ the mediocre interview recordings.

Firstly i placed two music tracks (one ambient) underneath the entirety of the film. The music was integral to the pacing of the video as well as the delivery of the interviewees speech. As a result it would be hard to understand everything that was said on the first and second viewing of the film. I picked up on the illegibility while editing but couldn’t see the extent of it because I had been working with the same audio of many hours.

I did test the audio with headphones on and off  but i didn’t find the right balance between them. I could have added subtitles to the bottom of the video but it would have taken the audience out of the film instead of immersing them.
Reflecting on this project i wish i had of borrowed the Zoom h2N. In future projects i will record on two audio devices just so i have a backup recording

 

 

Head Trauma – Reflection – Project 3

http://www.mediafactory.org.au/alexander-wilson/2016/04/19/head-trauma-project-3-documentary

In my last reflection I said I wanted to pull away from lo-fi aesthetics ad themes. I always had this intention. Now with Project 3 completed I feel like I have succeeded in making something a bit more beautiful.

So how did the portrait turn out? Pretty good.
I was happy overall and with the general flow of the film. It does have a certain momentum throughout. It has distinct peaks. It has a resolution. A climax as well. But one thing I will take away from this is a new profound respect for people who create documentaries. It’s bloody hard, tedious and tiresome. I spent so long going though the footage, cutting and positioning them to make sense of what I actually had.

Cuttings the easy bit. The hardest part is finding the best clip, out of the many. What makes it harder is that I have a particular OCD (self diagnosed but not that serious) with this kind of stuff I HAD to make sure I had the right piece of footage. I would often lose things throughout the premiere timeline and have to skim though every sound bite until I found the one that’s in my head.

Another thing I found hard, which I assume everyone else was experiencing, was trying to fit the story in 3minutes. I believe this is impossible to achieve (in most cases) if the story is to maintain its integrity. There were really important aspects in Ed’s journey that I couldn’t fit in. While the portrait still holds together, if I just had another minute of runtime the whole vibe of the video would be very different. But because there was such a hard constraint it forces your to decide what’s actually important, and what isn’t.

Seperate reflection on the audio composition

One thing I think I did well on the video was the incorporation of multiple storylines. There’s the story of the fish in the dirty tank then to the clean tank at the end, symbolising Eds positive outlook and reflection on the traumatic event. There’s the storyline of the invincible man which complements Eds story;

Zapped with electricity -> Eds seizure and coma

Waking up -> Ed Waking up

Confusion when waking up -> Eds confusion of the Clay woman

Indestructible man being helped to the bed -> Ed realizing the severity

I feel like harmony and closure of the plot was complimented thought this process.
I’m actually really interested in dream sequences so deciding to interview Ed was a no brainer (Disclaimer Eds also a good friend). For my VCE media video I tackled similar concepts of consciousness but because this is a real story I had to stick to it. I filmed all the B-roll in 60fps so in post-production I could slow it down to give it the ‘dream’ aesthetic. Fading the dark shots over each other and applying blend modes created some great transitioning. The RGB split represented Ed slowly falling into the coma. On all the shots I also added a blurriness to further the dream aesthetic

I purposefully didn’t show Ed talking till the pace shift (where the music changes). I wanted the audience to feel as though they were watching a story unfold. Then forced them into current time by showing Ed now, talking to the camera. I only revealed darkened glimpses of Ed in the bathroom to heighten feelings in the pace shift. I do worry that some of the narration is hard to understand and hear properly.

This project went a lot smoother than the last, mainly because I had to organise the interview at least a week before the deadline. I slowly chipped away at it. Although I spent all of yesterday working on this I am very happy with the outcome.

Collaboration and Good Teamwork

“Groans”
Rachel raised a suggestion that most people in high school would ‘groan’ when hearing they have to do a group assignment. I love collaboration and have always loved it. In primary school, collaboration could be both the best and the worst. I had a partner id always go with (he was a good friend). Id end up doing most of the work which i found quite annoying. But at the same time i got satisfaction form it knowing that i had created something so good that it was at the level, or if not higher, than people who were in a good healthy working group.

When working on small scale projects it is very easy for one person to do  the whole thing. But obviously this pattern could not continue.
Jump a few years, High school Media year 10 elective. Group work was always fun because it was a bludge. We would make the worst, but best videos because of their sheer stupidity. The other reason why theses videos worked so well was because each member of the team had the same goals and motivations to work together.

What made our process of collaboration so good was that it didn’t matter how stupid the idea was. We would test it and if it didn’t work, we’d scrap it. This meant that no idea was a bad idea. Through this creative process we could share and evolve ideas with minimal criticism and usually build the weaker ideas onto larger ideas.


Collaboration: Alliance, partnership, participation, combination, association, concert; teamwork, joint effort, working together


Continuing on this idea of good teamwork. To be a good collaborator you need to understand your strengths and weaknesses. In ‘One flew over the over the Cuckoo’s Nest’, McMurphy (Jack Nicholson) realises the team can capitalise on Chiefs height (a strength). He places him underneath the basketball hoop so when someone passes Chief the ball he can reach up and dunk it. He can also do the opposite for when the opposition is shooting, he can stop them from scoring

His strength is his height, while his weakness is emotion or speech. McMurphy This is one of my favourite examples of teamwork in film.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6WR_hisHKlI

Avant-garde web resource Ubu: I now feel the sun

Im genuinely very happy I drifted though the internet to find Ubu.com

Last week i ‘soundhounded’ (pretty much shazamed) this song from a mix on soundcloud.  I re-listened to the song just now Tully – I feel the sun. I wanted to learn more about this band so i went on wikipedia. Tully were an Australian Progressive rock group in the late 1960s and early 1970s.
After skim reading though the wikipedia page i found that they had “close associations with Sydney underground media collective UBU”. I wanted to find out more about the “psychedelic light show” UBU created for Tully.

So i search what Ubu is and it was “an experimental film-making collective based in Sydney that operated from 1965 to around 1970”. Around this time i had been down teh rabbit hole for at least 20minutes. Cut to 40mins and i’ve seen a few of their experimental films and read a bit more about them.

QUICK DIGRESSION POST 1

Then i found though google Ubu.com ( or ubuweb.com)  where i would spend 30minutes finding more and more stuff which led me to further and further places. I feel like Ubu will be a valuable source in the near future because its pretty much an encylopedia of Avant-garde film, audio, performance, conceptual art, poetry and much more. I need to explore this website a bit more but will be making frequent posts on interesting things i find.

 

QUICK DIGRESSION POST1: Noticing Media (music)

Digression in relation to Avant-Garde Web resource Ubu: i now feel the sun

A quick comment. This year i’ve started to actually appreciate Australian media more and more. The more i actually ‘NOTICE’ the media, the more i see how saturated we are by American influence. Recently i’ve been stumbling upon Australian music groups from the 70’s and 80’s (such as ‘Tully’ and ‘Flash and the Pan’) that are quite ‘underground’ (for someone whos grown up in a completely different era) and really quite interesting. You only hear John Farnham-eque songs on the radio but you never hear these for obvious reasons. While these are more ‘new wave’ they are actually kind of enlightening in their originality compared to music these days. Im not the type of person who says “i wish i lived in the _____”, and i do love current music, but its just the simplicity and progressive qualities of some of these songs from the early 70’s to mid 80’s that and so ‘original’.

Im going to explore Australian Media under a tagging system

Blurb, Still and Title shot for Production 3

Blurb:

After having a warm bath to soothe his pulsating headache, Ed Rickards collapses on his bathroom floor. 3 days later he wakes up with no memory of where he is or who the people were at his bedside.


Still shot
This photo was taken before the interview took place. I made sure to place the interviewee in the right side of the frame as it formed an asymetrical balance to the background elements

TitleA screenshot from the Finished Film. I applied a blend mode on the fish tank so when overlapped with the interview photo, would cause saturation of specific areas