The video really reads like a music video. It has a very particular and cohesive sense of style that matches the tone of the song. Not exactly sure I register the resonance with the poem. I guess it’s a question whether this is important to the work.
Similarly I can’t quite register the resonance with Alison’s video. In fact I think it actually works better as a response to your own video in terms of tone, and pace. It would be interesting to talk about what aspects of Alison’s video inspired the direction of your poem.
The video really reads like a music video. It has a very particular and cohesive sense of style that matches the tone of the song. Not exactly sure I register the resonance with the poem. I guess it’s a question whether this is important to the work.
Similarly I can’t quite register the resonance with Alison’s video. In fact I think it actually works better as a response to your own video in terms of tone, and pace. It would be interesting to talk about what aspects of Alison’s video inspired the direction of your poem.